Submission (#1556) Approved

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13 February 2023, 00:36:58 CET (2 years ago)
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13 February 2023, 10:19:35 CET (2 years ago) by Green
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Caught in the rain (a)

Do you think the gods smile upon us at this moment (b)
If we give them more beautiful moments to stare upon (c )
Do you think they’ll grant us more time? (d)
More time to love each other at this very moment. (e)

Except we both know the gods don’t exist. (f)

We ignore the pain (a)
The bodies that once held vigor, now stand impotent (b)
The grass blades dripping in our very lawn (c )

We made this house a home together in our prime (d)
You yell in the rain but it comes out as a whisper, “time is now our opponent.” (e)

I’ll love you till we fade into the mist. (f)


(6 rhyme couplets) (4 extra lines)
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