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14 January 2025, 19:41:32 CET (4 days ago)
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16 January 2025, 00:18:36 CET (3 days ago) by Usaretam
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In the heart of a frozen forest, Naomi, a brave chowling, stood with her paws firm against the snow. Her breath clouded in the frigid air as she surveyed the creature that had terrorized the nearby village for weeks. The ice beast, a towering figure made entirely of frozen spikes and swirling snow, roared, sending gusts of frosty wind that knocked trees over. Its glowing blue eyes fixed on Naomi, a glint of hunger in them.
Beside Naomi stood her best friend, Glacia, a chowling with the ability to control fog and mist. They had worked together in the past, but today was different. Today, they had to defeat the beast before it could reach the village.
“Are you ready, Naomi?” Glacia asked, her voice steady, though her eyes betrayed her nerves.
Naomi nodded. “I’ll keep it distracted. You blind it.”
With a plan in place, Naomi sprinted forward, her paws rolling up snow as she weaved between trees, drawing the beast's attention. She stopped just out of its reach and, with a sly grin, began packing snow into tight, compact snowballs. The ice beast growled, its breath growing colder, and it stomped toward her with terrifying speed.
Naomi threw the first snowball. It hit the beast square in the face, angered by this the beast turned it’s attention towards Naomi. Naomi kept throwing, faster and faster, creating a relentless attack of snowballs that pelted the creature. She ducked and dodged its attacks, always staying just out of range, drawing its fury away from Glacia.
Glacia closed her eyes, gathering her energy. She raised her paws to the sky, and a thick fog rolled in from nowhere, enveloping the area. The creature’s icy eyes widened in confusion, its senses impaired by the dense mist.
With the beast disoriented, Naomi took one final, swift step. She hurled one last snowball directly at the beast's eyes, distracting it long enough for Glacia to conjure a blinding fog, rendering it completely helpless.
“Now!” Naomi called.
With the beast unable to see, Glacia created a surge of fog that condensed around it, freezing it solid in a matter of moments. The once-menacing creature was now a frozen statue, defeated by Naomi’s quick thinking and Glacia’s power. Together, they had saved the village once again.

Number of words: 380(+76ft)
1 Additional chows: +30ft
Creativity bonus: used my chowling with fog breath to distract brinicale+15
Total additional FT: 121
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